Trevor Dow

1)My paper was not what I expected. I thought I did alot better. When I looked over the corrections I noticed that I had made a lot of mistakes.

2) I need to remember to
1 check my spelling
2 check my word tense
3 read my paper out loud
4 keep it short and sweet

I need to remember not to
1 use comma splices
2 use semi colons when they are not needed
3 use very descriptive language

3) I learned how to get my self over my comma splice problem. I also learned to comprese my paper into what I need and not to put alot of extras.