Reflection

During the revision I tried to shorten my paragraphs so that I could get to the race quicker and changed all of my verbs to present tense. Also, during the revision I had a parallelism problem that I know how to fix now. I feel that my paper is better, hopefully. I added more names to it and explained things more thoroughly. All in all, I think it is a better profile of the Neshoba County Fair than the first draft was. In the future I'll be able to spot parallelism problems better and I'll be able to keep in the same tense throughout the whole paper easier. I never really was good at staying in the same tense until now, thanks to this paper. Hopefully my future papers will be easier to right and come out better than this one. =)