I read every one's paper in my small group and I was scared that mine was the worst. I have a lot to work on with grouping my paragraphs and re-phrasing some of my sentences. Overall the session wasn't as brutal as I expected. I'm having trouble reading some of Keleher's handwriting but so far so good.
-I'm noticing that I use a lot of repeat words (good, I, etc...)
-I am having some fudge ups switching from past to present tense.
-Some of my sentences are scrambled and leave the reader confused!
That's all I can tell for now. Time to spruce it up a bit!
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I'm still working on my penmanship, Spyke:) I'll be in my office Thursday am if you'd like me to translate anything I put. You could send me the sentence as you wrote it--via the blog email--and I could hazard a guess as to what I wrote. Thanks for posting.
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