Knee-Jerk Reaction

I realize that i have alot to work on in my paper. I look forward to the end product and to be able to see how much my paper has changed and how much better it actually is. I knew when i turned this paper in that I it would have some errors, every paper does. I was proud of the grade i got, especially since it was my first draft that was actually submitted. I really hope that i am able to fix my paper the way professor keleher wants it to be, and hopefully receive an A the next time around. Also Professor Keleher had some really good points. He said that i should explain "peanut butter". While i was writing my paper i guess i felt that the reader didnt need to know exactly what it was. But once i do explain what it is, the paragraph makes much more sense.