Anna's knee-jerk reaction

As I look over the insights Mr. Keleher wrote on my paper, I don't feel at all impressed nor surprised. This was my first college essay writing and I wasn't sure if it was what I was expected to make. Anyhow, I was quite confident that it was done correctly. I feel quite happy with the outcome since I don't have to make any mayor changes, which was my worse fear. Sometimes I sympathize with my writing and feel reluctant when I have to let go. As well, I feel that the comments are very appropriate and I'm looking forward to consider them and make the necessary improvements.