Spencer - 1st Profile Regrouping

I have decided that I can focus on a couple of the specific areas in my essay and improve the paper for the next draft.

I need to remember to

• Make sure that all areas read well and make sense as a coherent thought
• Realize that if it feels like I'm stretching something, I probably am.

I need to remember not to

• Use comma's in sentences with one 'subject' (not compound)
• Try to force anything