Docucam

The docucam session was somehow beneficial. I learned that my major problem was that I was missing a main component in my essay which was tension. I needed to create it by writing from a certain perspective or perspectives. I might want to add a few more examples to enhance my writing style too. I will surely try to write on the idea Mr. Keleher provided me with. In fact, I had this idea on my mind earlier on, just didn't proceed with it! Too bad!