Darrin Rountree

1. I turned in my paper knowing it was a strong one. I was expecting to see many of the comments which i did. I was hoping for the grade which i received.

2. I need to remember to:

• read my paper out loud so i can catch my simple mistakes
• look over my paragraphing
• double check my spelling and punctuation

I need to remember not to:

• rush my endings.
• use c/s in my duologue
• use elaborate discription

3. I learned that I can describe things without over elaborating things. I really enjoyed looking to see what writing levels some of my class mates were at. I learned that I have to be careful with comoma slices because it could drasticaly lower my grade