Reflection post.

My paper changed in such a way that will make it more enjoyable. I tried to cut out a lot of the repetitiveness and extra detail that bogged down my writing. I think it is a much better paper and i'm anxious to see what i will recieve on it or what comments i might get back. This experience has helped pay attention to how I tend to repeat myself at tiems and add unnecessary details. I think overall, it has helped me a lot.