ANNA'S REFLECTION

I feel much more confident in this second draft than I felt in my first draft. I liked both of my drafts, but I feel that this second one has a better flow and direction. It is easier to read and not stagger through my sentences, as opposed to what happened in my first draft. As well, I got rid of some poetic-like senteces that seemed out of place. Other changes I made were that I added more relevant and what to me are interesting experiences and thoughts and explained better what seemed confusing. I think that leaving my paper unseen for a while helped me view my mistakes more easily, since I wasn't attatched emotionally anymore to anything that I had written.