Reflection

My draft that I turned in this morning I thought improved by stating many of my thoughts more clearly. I was able to do this by elmininating unnessary words. I feel that the paper flows much better with some simple changes that were made. This will effect my future papers and my writing in general by anaylzing words that are in my sentences. Before, I had never really even been told to address the problem of wordiness. Even if I do use words that do not add to meaningful thoughts, I will be able to look for that when revising my work the first time.