My "Knee-Jerk Reaction"

Personally i think that all the comments that were left on my paper were left there for a reason. I definitly agree with most of them. Reading through my paper again, i did notice a lot of repetition and i'll be sure to go through and fiz that so my paper flows a little better. I was actually suprised not to get that many commets on my description becasue i was afraid that i had to much, but i guess it turned out just right. I'm very happy with the results of my paper and i'm ready to make it even better!