On my final draft, I need to remember to:
- focus on my strongest paragraph and broaden its ideas
- fix my paragraph transition issues in a way that the paragraphs flow well
- create something novel that will build up tension throughout the article
- avoid using too many repetitive sounds/words
On the other hand, I need to remember not to:
- use ornamental language that makes the essay sound dramatic
- use the expression "one" when referring to someone
- list the obvious virtues of the place and sound so ad-like. This is not an advertisement
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