I learned how much descriptive was expected. During past classes, it was confusing, but now that I've seen how much more is needed in the paper I have already written, I feel a lot better about describing a lot more in my essay.
Mr. Keleher also mentioned that I did a good job describing the city my profiled place is in. I put it in because the area is a desert, and I wanted to set the scene. I think you might see the place differently if you think of it in a city in Georgia than where it is.
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