Spencer - 1st Profile kneejerk

My initial reaction to the graded first draft of my profile essay was really quite mixed. I was happy with the grade, and I had expected to have a significant number of grammatical errors, but I was suprised at the few focused areas of comment. There were three specific sections of the essay that I felt I had really stretched to come up with what I thought was some good work, and these were the three areas that had attracted the most blue ink. But, like I said, I had definately "stretched", and I had felt that while I was writing.