Reflection

Ok, so i emailed my essay yesterday and my paper didn't change too drastically. My paper ended up being an entire page longer this draft than my previous one. I felt like my paper as a whole was a lot better. It explained things more clearly like the peanut butter part. I think that i learned alot more about writing through this paper than any previous papers I have written in the past. I learned how to grab the readers attention better. This paper definately improved my writing somewhat.