Reflect

I just realized I didn't change the date on my paper before I turned it in. It's sort of driving me crazy.
After changing the things that where written in blue on my first draft, I actually removed some of the things that I fixed. I think this draft is a real upgrade from my other draft. I feel pretty good about it, but I know it could be better. I was very tired when I turned it in, and I knew if I worked on it, I would only make it worse. I know it is better than my first, so I'm sure I'll be getting a better grade.
I fixed some of the descriptions to move at a quicker pace by removing excess detail. In some places, I added more details where there was none. I also put in some information about the place that I had left out in the first draft.
I think my next paper will be a major improvement because this was the first I've written since high school and it was kind of like a warm up exercise.