I need to remember to:
1. Work on thinking up a new story to put in my paper, to decrease the repetitiveness.
2. take out a lot of my hyperboles
3. Make it flow better
4. Add a little more emotion to it
5. Make it more personable
I need to remember NOT to do:
1. Keep it lengthy and wordy
2. exaggerate to much or add too much description
3. REPEAT MYSELF!
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