Tuesday, November 6, 2007

passive voice

before

Contraception is known for preventing pregnancies as well as sexually transmitted diseases. In spite of this, the Catholic population is warned against the use of contraception, even between married couples, since it is said to interfere with the plans God has chosen for the future.

after

Contraception prevents pregnancies as well as sexually transmitted diseases. In spite of this, the Catholic population warns against the use of contraception, even between married couples, since it interferes with the plans God has for the future.

before

Nevertheless, the Catholic Church seems to ignore the frightening reality of AIDS and how it is spread, which is mainly through unprotected sex.

after

Nevertheless, the Catholic Church seems to ignore the frightening reality of AIDS and how it is spread, mainly through unprotected sex.

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