Argument essay

In the newest paper, the argument essay, I reorganized the paragraphs and fixed some puntual and grammatical errors. I ended up placing a a real-life paragraph from my essay as my introductory paragraph for more emphasis and feeling about my topic. Sometimes, reading over the paper multiple times can help you to re-think the organization, because some paragraphs may have stronger points than others and different points altogether, so you must make sure they are placed properly. If the paper flows steadily, along with a strong argument, the reader will most likely want to read it.