It’s 7:00 p.m. this Sunday night. People are walking and chatting down the roads of Downtown Atlanta. Everywhere I look, individuals are roaming. They are searching for the best place to have dinner and enjoy their times in this beautiful city. Atlanta is, in fact, a thrilling city that anyone can expect a lot from. Skyscrapers rise high from the undergrounds of this city; the shimmering lights coming out from them are such a staggering view at night. However, what is the one glamorous place in Atlanta that can over satisfy me and all the other hungry people? Look ahead at this cylindrical shaped tower called the Westin Peachtree Plaza and take a peek at the Sundial Restaurant And Bar high up!
The Westin Peachtree Plaza hotel is the highest hotel in the Western hemisphere, making it one of the most visited hotels in the world. One of its distinctive features is the Sundial Restaurant, Bar, & Observation Tower located on the top three floors of the building. The restaurant was built in 1972, back in the old days when technology wasn’t as advanced as today. Because of this, one would doubt it being such an incredible place and would consider it maybe antiquated; well, he/she can expect a lot while spending time in this place because it is equipped with all the aspects that make a restaurant a significant one and even more.
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2 comments:
In first sentence consider different adjective for the night besides "this".
When you say "look ahead at this..." I think that may be second person..not really sure.
Good background on the hotel in the second paragraph!
The last sentence kind of confuses me, consider revising.
I LOVE THE IMAGERY OF THE PARAGRAPHS.I CAN SEE MYSELF THERE. YOU MIGHT WANT TO CONSIDER CHANGING HIGH UP TO UP HIGH. USE OVERLY SATISFY ME INSTEAD OF OVER SATISFY.IT MIGHT MAKE IT FLOW BETTER.GOOD WORK CHICO.
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